Broke Up? - relationships lol

[litoshawn4o9]

standin in the rain
illusions of the mind came to play
i cant believe of the words you just say//
heart broken, riped and torn into pieces
dismangled and laid, unfoldable creases//
R.I.P to the deceace of my feelings towards you
C.R.Y a river, the tears flows for you//
skies scribbled blue, the sign of my loss
how can a 1 yr relation thrown into a toss//
criss my cross, was always dedicated truthful
kiss the loss, always thought the love was crucial//
who knew i was the one being used?
thought you was the spark, but i was a dead fuse//
feelings washed out, like a stain on my shirt
the lipstick you left, gone with the dirt//
dont act like your hurt, you left me for my friend
i guess im gon R.I.P cause you left me dead in the end//
an angel god send, flying without wings
im just gon lay back and reminince on past things//

[babydorkee]

nice!!! i luvv reading ur stuff haha, it always hekkerz good

[XceKutN Ph0-sHo]

i swear all tha girls fall in love with guys that makes poems about them ahhaha anyways wut ever shawn

[froggyboy604]

i like your poem. Their always so nice to read. You must be really talented.