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Oh Wise One
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Name of Piece:
him

Copyright/credits to author:
© C. Bagwell

Is the piece finished:
Yes

Rating and Reason for rating:
PG-AC..there are just adult insinuations

just one more time I say
then I'll let him go
just one more time I say
then I'll tell him no.

I'll close the door to my heart
and never let him back in
a phone call or a smile
and it happens again

the want to be with him
the desire to feel him
the need to love him
and him love me back

I can still change him
he's not too far gone
and I keep thinking that
though I'm still alone

this will never happen again
I'm not blind to that fact
he'll never love me like he once did
but strength is what I lack

tell him no I tell myself
he'll only break your heart
he's been like this
even from the start

a day will come
and I'll be able to say no
when I find this strength
I'll forever let him go.
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Post by froggyboy604 »

Nice poem, It's very touching. There are some pretty good Rhymes.
Oh Wise One
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Post by Oh Wise One »

froggyboy604 wrote:Nice poem, It's very touching. There are some pretty good Rhymes.
Yeah, I have a problem rhyming. A lot of poetry I write doesn't rhyme because I don't like rhyming. This one just happened to work out well.

Thank you. :-D
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