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StevenF50

12 Girls band.

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Joined: Sat Dec 11, 2010 8:51 pm

Post Sat Dec 11, 2010 10:25 pm

No More Sun

Hello,

This is my 4th Autumn poem but the only one on the internet.


It’s an autumn day,
And you pray for the sun to stay,
But inside you know,
That the suns glow,
Is gone.

No sunny dawns,
Nor plants in the lawns,
Colour has been drained,
Plant life can’t be maintaned,
It’s Autumn

Thanks.
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froggyboy604

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Anime music gaming Fanatic

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Joined: Thu Aug 18, 2005 11:28 pm

Post Sun Dec 12, 2010 1:43 am

great ryhmes
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mftx5kt3

Weakling

Posts: 7

Joined: Sun Dec 19, 2010 9:43 pm

Post Sun Dec 19, 2010 11:02 pm

:)
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StevenF50

12 Girls band.

Posts: 18

Joined: Sat Dec 11, 2010 8:51 pm

Post Thu May 05, 2011 7:32 pm

Thanks for your replies.
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babydorkee

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Deejay

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Joined: Thu Aug 18, 2005 6:44 am

Location: cali

Post Wed May 11, 2011 8:49 am

nice poem! its probably a typo here, but you spelled maintained wrong
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