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some freeverse

Posted: Wed Aug 17, 2005 5:39 am
by dragon1290
something i made up, kinda weird how you can make up poetry when you're feeling down =\


when i look into your eyes,
lookin bright and beautiful
who knew that it was just all lies
thinking of the past, where we used to last,
you in my arms, layin down, on the grass
the happiness that flowed through me was just undescribable
breakin up? psh, that was just impossible,
but here we are, far apart
you're lookin at me with half a heart

you left me in the darkness,
lost and confused, lonley and sad
as i sat there dismayed
i couldn't believe it, that you would actually say
that maybe it's better for us to go our seperate ways,
later i found out that i wasnt the one for you
you just felt pity for me and said that "i love you"
so all the times we had were just good lies,
that the feelings you had for me, just an act
in fact, nothing was real,
you used me to get to someone else

but you dont really know that i actually love you
my feelings for you weren't all lies,
i cherished all the times we had when we used to be,
used to see that we had no worries,
until the day i found out the truth about our life,
that nothing was real and it was all a lie,
you just didnt know that i do love you
that i thought that we could on forver,
you broke my heart, and killed my love,
i am now and forever, an emotionless guy.....

Posted: Wed Aug 17, 2005 8:12 pm
by xSharingaNx
very good! now if only i can make stuff up O_o

Posted: Fri Aug 19, 2005 9:36 am
by XceKutN Ph0-sHo
dammmnnn lil bro's got some skillz haha man he surpassed his master lmao MUAHAHAHA or not

Posted: Sat Aug 20, 2005 7:47 am
by babydorkee
nice rhyming hehe...u got skillz haha

Posted: Tue Aug 30, 2005 12:02 am
by litoshawn4o9
DAYMN VINCENT!!! ahah oh snaps never knew you kan spit lmao lol mannnn tell you the truth i felt this line the most

but here we are, far apart
you're lookin at me with half a heart

daymnn ahah make me wanna spit again lol