Dedication to the Hurricane Katrina Victims..

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litoshawn4o9

Dedication to the Hurricane Katrina Victims..

Post by litoshawn4o9 »

yo check it

they say hurricane katrina was a catagory 5
i never knew so many people could've live or died//
lost everything in a blink of an eye
while i just sit here watchin families bout to cry//
flooded homes, businessess lost to the water
how can i just sit here while children lose their fathers//
i feel so helpless to the poor in need
i wish i could be one of the people to plant a new seed//
bring a good deed, katrina was expected yet came unprepared
now im seeing people with the look of life aint being fair//
we now give goods for the care, families relocated
i guess this how life is, katrina now being hated//
hurricane gon be dated, as the worse event ever
they say its worse than the tsunami but i say never//
this flow may be clever, as its my dedication to the loss
who lost their homes and families frm katrina's cause//
hopin tomorrow will shine a new day
where everybody can start a new life
as the first word they say//
now we gotta look at the bigger situation
on how everbody gotta start life as a new continuation//
so i give my respects to the people who lost
i leave this in writing in ice of the up coming frost//
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Post by XceKutN Ph0-sHo »

MAD PROPS SHAWN!!! thats good stuff keep up yo good flows
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i hear ya man...
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Post by babydorkee »

yupzzz...i agreee...great flow!
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Post by froggyboy604 »

great poem.
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Nice! Ever considered makin' an account here? That way you could post even more of your great poems!
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Post by Nemo »

Beautiful, but sad.
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