Life - see it, live it

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litoshawn4o9

Life - see it, live it

Post by litoshawn4o9 »

Why do we die to live
and live to die?
why do we fight to win
and lose and cry?//
there's no reason in life to live the way we are
examples of drunk people sleepin at bars//
life has more meaning than extreme suicide
people dont realize the feelings people have inside//
stay by my side - most common phrased said
leave the next morning, while your still in bed//
you get the trend? life has different meanings
some see it good, some see it bad
some say its happy, and some say it sad//
life with no dad, little children will see it too
life in poverty, little children suffer the truth//
the life of the world is now corrupted
pollution and society, hatrid been erupted//
gangs fights and killing, it will never end
worry about life, next day it might be your friend//
the angel's god send, were put here for a reason
to give higher order in life, give us a treason//
life comes like the season, first comes birth, death come last
be prepare for the harsh things, life comes back like the past//
it may come too fast, but keep up with the pace
just dont get introuble, cops gon get you mace//
look at yourself, do you see your own life?
live it to the fullest, help people with their strife//
imagine the little children suffering from communism
how their body is fragile and weak, from the weak immune system//
you see the war? its a useless game of god
the soldiers are gettin killed, for the sake of the upper dog//
you see these logs? they were made from our trees
but people use them for useless things, now we have to pay for fees//
our intuition fees, something life has put in
we gotta go college and try not to make future sins//
dont wanna kick the tin? imagine the people around the earth
alot of them have it harder than us, they walkin on straight dirt//
playin the game of survival, you either make it or not
alot of these people been playin for food in their pot//
so, see the bigger picture in life, the harsh environment
the suffering, the hatrid, the crucial life development//
soon life will end, and so will our future, past, and present
so live life to the fullest, be the angel that god sent//
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Post by XceKutN Ph0-sHo »

omg im in love with ur flowings... MAD PROPS!!!
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i agree w/that flow..haha...great job!!! u rockk..haha
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Post by froggyboy604 »

The flow is great.

Your freestyle poem really made me think how great and bad life can be for some people.
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