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short poem~

Posted: Tue Oct 04, 2005 3:38 am
by dragon1290
I feel the pain
coming from my heart
telling me
that our love's been torn apart
everyday of every minute
I think of you and bless the moment
my heart keeps beating like no other
but I cannot hold my one true lover

Posted: Tue Oct 04, 2005 4:02 am
by mui_mui
oh man someone sounds painfully love sick xD good poem, nice rhyming!! i can't rhyme for scraps T__T

Posted: Tue Oct 04, 2005 6:43 am
by SleepyNguyen
Short but sweet, it's a good poem.

Posted: Tue Oct 04, 2005 10:47 pm
by Now_N_Forever
sounds like its from a song....
but DAMN~ i LOVE IT... its really deep and emotional~
psstttt... WRITE MORE... LOL

Posted: Tue Oct 04, 2005 11:42 pm
by dragon1290
lol thanks o.O

eh i think i like short poems better than long ones

Posted: Sun Jul 30, 2006 6:56 am
by froggyboy604
Your such a good poet, vince. It's so sad. keep up the good work.