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SleepyNguyen
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Dolls

Post by SleepyNguyen »

Porcelain Doll

Blonde Curls and Victorian dress
Empty eyes and Cold caress

Picture perfect, Miniature grace
Silent voice, Painted face

Sleeping Beauty,
Sprawled about floor.
Broken Toy,
Forevermore.
_________

Way too much Rozen Maiden Traumend for me
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Post by mui_mui »

a little bit TOO much rozen maiden traumend for you haha good poem! reeled me in at first.. the ending didn't really get to me =/ otherwise nice rhyming =P
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Bestinwest
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Post by Bestinwest »

heh
cool
Sometimes I want to think about the yesterdays...

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Post by froggyboy604 »

I like your rhyme.
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