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Dolls

Posted: Wed Jan 18, 2006 2:19 am
by SleepyNguyen
Porcelain Doll

Blonde Curls and Victorian dress
Empty eyes and Cold caress

Picture perfect, Miniature grace
Silent voice, Painted face

Sleeping Beauty,
Sprawled about floor.
Broken Toy,
Forevermore.
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Way too much Rozen Maiden Traumend for me

Posted: Wed Jan 18, 2006 3:47 am
by mui_mui
a little bit TOO much rozen maiden traumend for you haha good poem! reeled me in at first.. the ending didn't really get to me =/ otherwise nice rhyming =P

Posted: Wed Jan 18, 2006 5:58 am
by Bestinwest
heh
cool

Posted: Sun Jul 30, 2006 6:44 am
by froggyboy604
I like your rhyme.