No More Sun

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StevenF50
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No More Sun

Post by StevenF50 »

Hello,

This is my 4th Autumn poem but the only one on the internet.


It’s an autumn day,
And you pray for the sun to stay,
But inside you know,
That the suns glow,
Is gone.

No sunny dawns,
Nor plants in the lawns,
Colour has been drained,
Plant life can’t be maintaned,
It’s Autumn

Thanks.
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froggyboy604
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Post by froggyboy604 »

great ryhmes
mftx5kt3
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Post by mftx5kt3 »

:)
StevenF50
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Post by StevenF50 »

Thanks for your replies.
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Post by babydorkee »

nice poem! its probably a typo here, but you spelled maintained wrong
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