Mxproject Asian Pop Music Radio & Entertainment

Posted: **Fri Apr 07, 2006 3:44 am**

Lol hey Henry it's Hien i found my old forum account. Anyways here is my firt post for this forum

when i first saw sitting there
ure voice was all i can hear
you were like an angel from above
at that moment was when i fell in love
since then you were always in my heart
nothign could have torn us apart
but after that fateful night
i could no longer see ure light

thats all i got so far haha

Posted: **Fri Apr 07, 2006 3:48 am**

haha wuddup wuddup,

not bad man, pretti slick, u got potential just work on ur flow a lil more, it doesnt seem to connect as much. overall its pretti ill for a beginner.,

PROPZ TO YA!

Posted: **Mon Apr 10, 2006 4:22 am**

hehe i agree w/henry. nice rhymess. but u're missing a you in the first sentence hehe

Posted: **Mon Apr 10, 2006 6:53 am**

Lol. Hi Hien <3.

yeah a word or two seems to be missing from the first line.

Posted: **Sun Jul 30, 2006 6:29 am**

i like it. nice job.

Mxproject Asian Pop Music Radio & Entertainment

My first ryhme in here

My first ryhme in here