short poem~

dragon1290 · Post by **dragon1290** » Tue Oct 04, 2005 3:38 am

I feel the pain
coming from my heart
telling me
that our love's been torn apart
everyday of every minute
I think of you and bless the moment
my heart keeps beating like no other
but I cannot hold my one true lover

mui_mui · Post by **mui_mui** » Tue Oct 04, 2005 4:02 am

oh man someone sounds painfully love sick xD good poem, nice rhyming!! i can't rhyme for scraps T__T

SleepyNguyen · Post by **SleepyNguyen** » Tue Oct 04, 2005 6:43 am

Short but sweet, it's a good poem.

Now_N_Forever · Post by **Now_N_Forever** » Tue Oct 04, 2005 10:47 pm

sounds like its from a song....
but DAMN~ i LOVE IT... its really deep and emotional~
psstttt... WRITE MORE... LOL

dragon1290 · Post by **dragon1290** » Tue Oct 04, 2005 11:42 pm

lol thanks o.O

eh i think i like short poems better than long ones

Post by **froggyboy604** » Sun Jul 30, 2006 6:56 am

Your such a good poet, vince. It's so sad. keep up the good work.